There was once a fox with an empty stomach, who went in search for food. Then he saw a vineyard, where large bunches of golden grapes hung from the vines above his head.
The fox jumped up and down, trying to bite into a bunch of the grapes, but he failed. He tried again and again, with all his might, but he still failed to reach the grapes.
Suddenly, he thought a way to fullfill his desire. Then, he tried to climb the vine, but he does not realize that many ants nest there. So, he was bitten by an ant and fell from the vine. Then, he blew out the vine, exactly in the ant nest in order to there's nothing the ant on the vine anymore. After the vine free from the ants, he started to climb the vine with his fingers.
Finally, he can ate that he wanted, that is delicious wines. And he always went there if he was hungry.
The fox jumped up and down, trying to bite into a bunch of the grapes, but he failed. He tried again and again, with all his might, but he still failed to reach the grapes.
Suddenly, he thought a way to fullfill his desire. Then, he tried to climb the vine, but he does not realize that many ants nest there. So, he was bitten by an ant and fell from the vine. Then, he blew out the vine, exactly in the ant nest in order to there's nothing the ant on the vine anymore. After the vine free from the ants, he started to climb the vine with his fingers.
Finally, he can ate that he wanted, that is delicious wines. And he always went there if he was hungry.
this is quite good. but i doubt some things. how is a fox can take the ladder? how does it can combine the ladder and the woods? since the fox is an animal and not a human -_-
BalasHapusin the last sentence you should use past tense.
thanks :)